"(note: for those who know Epicurean metaphysics, I am generalizing the whole of his theory, sticking only to the parts which still hold sway today, after years of scientific progress)"
That's something I said so that I wouldn't have to go in depth into his whole theory. However, I do think that I explained the important aspects in my original post. Maybe I just don't get what you mean by rambling, because it seems to me that most if not all of the post is necessary to my arguments. But if you find a few unnecessary things, by all means do edit them, just don't change the flow of reasoning. As to the quote, I was trying to explain the most applicable aspects of the theory in a way that the reader who knew nothing about Epicurus could understand, but the quote certainly wraps up most of Epicurean metaphysics and ethics in a box. I just tryied to explain certain aspects of it more.
Thanks!
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