Welcome aboard gregor and thanks for trying.
I see what you are attempting to do. We need something that shows the power of the evolutionary process. Something simple but a still a reasonable representation of the process.
It seems that those who object to the ToE are unable to grasp what is going on. One of their problems may be that they can't "get" the astonishing (to me too) results from such a simple (in it's basic form) process.
Nice try to get there but it would need a lot of careful rework to be clearer. (and I don't think it needs all those references to start with).
Thanks.
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