Can somebody suggest how to fix the Second Law stuff under Primordial Soup section?
Yeah, delete it. The information content of the entire article would increase dramatically!
Keep the third paragraph apart from the opening and closing sentences, and perhaps merge in the statement from the fourth paragraph reminding that they had not actually created likfe...
Add a paragraph under the Critics section addressing 2LoT objections as they pertain to abiogenesis.
Perhaps something in the intro emphasising the distinction between abio and evo.
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