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Thanks for the OP (opening post). It is a topic that has come up before it may be a good idea for you to search the site as find the discussions on the topic. You could add your comments and questions to one of those perhaps.
After that, if you still want this OP used to start a thread you will have to shorten it to about 1/4 of the current length. You can use other parts of it as the discussion develops. You could drop the "religion and scientists" and the "Bible" sections without affecting your basic thesis I think.
It appears that your whole point can be condensed to a paragraph that says something about "a creation needs a creator" or "nothing so complex can come about by itself". If that is the case try to be as clear and succinct as you can.
You should also note that this point has been brought up before and that there are some logical difficulties with it. Try to browse this site for that.