As much as I would like to believe that you are listening to any critique of your work, I don't believe you are.
Brian's tone in his lengthy critique was informative, careful, and for the most part non-judgemental. You posted a paper that you have discussed publishing. Brian, as a teacher, gave you an editorial analysis of your writing and research style. He offered suggestions for making your point in a more scholarly way. He gave insights into how to present your information in a more ordered fashion.
He didn't discuss whether or not your information was factual, except in instances where his educational background gave him insight. He DID discuss whether or not you had actually made your case for them being factual. He offered assistance in helping you get primary sourse information for your paper.
I feel that your tone towards Brian was unbecoming an adult who has recieved invaluable and timeconsuming help with a paper he wants published. As you will find, if you attempt to publish in any type of scholarly or mainstream publication, an editor will tear your work apart.
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