Creation Short Film

Hello I am wanting to get some feedback on a creation short film I made. Its a proof of concept on no budget but besides using text instead of a pro voice over I could not afford I think it turned out rather well. Any way I would really like to get feed back and thoughts from people on the forum if thats ok. Any way you can watch it at the link below. Thanks! Oh and if you rate it please be fair and rate it on how well its done and not on your views of creation. It did take a long time to make.Creation Movie LinkEdited by Sulla, : No reason given.

Sorry I did not make myself clear its not made as Proof.

Hi NosyNed glad you liked it. The only reason its connected to the lion video is becouse it was also animation.The anitmations are mostly NASA public domain animations. I did the film as a test of video and music editing. I had never done either before. I thought it was ok for a first try. Will try to go back and make some others later that I do most of the work on. It just a matter of getting the money and time.I know what you mean about youtube. Not really setup for debate like normal forums where you ban post more information.

You are exactly right for most of the effects they are downloaded from ESA/Hubble. I downloaded all of the videos then recut the best ones to match the music and dialog etc and of course added the pans and zooms of still images. Mainly it was as I said an excercise in editing video and music and timing. And it was all something new to me as my background is in illustration and fine art.I would like to do another one in HD and all from scratch in 3DS Max with pro voice over etc. But I have to get the time and budget for it before I will be able to. But some dayAlso thanks for all the feedback from every one. It is interesting getting to hear what people like and dislike etc.