To be honest, I expected you to fight making changes. I wish I had saved a copy of the original message 1, for sake of comparison.
Since the matter of "statements of faith" seems to be a central part of your topic theme, I suggest that you get that into the topic title. Instead of "Science, dogmas, and a sign displayed at the AiG Creation Museum", how about "Science, dogmas, and AiG Creation Museum statement of faith"?
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