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Author Topic:   Is The Evolution of Consciousness Science?
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08-06-2011 9:12 AM
Reply to: Message 1 by Doctor Witch
08-05-2011 9:51 PM


You set the stage through most of your post for a discussion about the mind/brain relationship, but then conclude by asking about the origins of consciousness. I think you could get rid of everything except the last three paragraphs, then add another paragraph or two outlining your position on the topic.
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08-08-2011 7:34 AM
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08-06-2011 4:12 PM


Re: Updated and hopefully improved version
Hi Doctor Witch,
I don't see a connection between your characterization of the brain/mind schism in academia, and your sudden shift in the 4th paragraph to a science/religion schism.
You also don't say what the "two theories of evolution" are, or what "creation stories" you're referring to.
If you want to discuss scientific issues of brain/mind, then there's no need to bring religion into this.
And if you want to discuss creation/evolution issues then it's difficult to see the relevance of the brain/mind issues.
If these things are related then you need to make that clear to the reader.
If they're not related then choose one and drop the other.

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