You have a dangling paragraph at the end.
If you want the discussion to be about faith in science, it needs to be drawn to it more tightly than just a statement that it's a continuation of a prior thread that was about faith in science. The title should be changed to draw it to that topic, also.
It would probably be a good idea to shorten and simplify the presentation by focusing just on evolution and leaving "environmental traits" and memes aside for the moment.
-- | Percy |
| EvC Forum Director |