This new attempt is still twice as long as your original post over at what is life?, which was already at the margins of acceptable length. This is from the Forum Guidelines:
When introducing a new topic, please keep the message narrowly focused. Do not include more than a few points.
Could you trim this down to a few paragraphs that introduce the topic and describe your position? You can introduce all the additional information you like in the course of discussion. Please post a note when you're done.