Perceptions of Reality

I'm new to this so feel free to let me know if I'm talking rubbish.This seems to be a pretty conceptually dense 2000 word essay. Do you think it might be possible to simplify and streamline it to some extent? I suspect that such a comprehensive treatment might restrict the readership of your OP.Are there any elements you feel could be edited out. The parts discussing where you feel people on the forum fit and the positions of other faiths don't seem central to your discussion.I look forward to your feedback.TTFN,AWP.S. I appreciate this is conservative compared to your essay on abiogenesis.

Alternatively you might productively re-work this slightly to be your second article at 'Columnists corner'. It is already longer than either of Mammuthus's essays there.TTFN,AW

Do you want to hang on until you have that ready? Or do you think you could produce a streamlined version of your OP to get discusssion flowing before you unleash your magnum opus?TTFN,AW

Have you thought any more about whether you want to save this material up for a column or do you still want to open it up as a Coffee House thread?TTFN,AW