This is a pretty nice essay but a pretty poor opening post. At 2300 words it is too long by at least 1500 words, it touches on a number of subtopics (too broad a focus), and at the end it isn't clear what your position is. How about this instead:
I believe that Darwin was ultimately incorrect in asserting that evolution was the mechanism which explained the speciation of the entire spectrum of life from primitive organisms. Evolution has not been tested to the point where this can be considered established.
How's that?
-- | Percy |
| EvC Forum Director |