OMG firstly this would fail in my county because of the format there are strict guidelines on how you make a doctorate disertation.
The covers: on the top you need Logotip of the university, university full address, your title, in the middle you write doctores disertation and the title of your disertation bellow, lower right your name and surname lower left the date.
First page: the same shit as the covers
Next page: table of contents
Nex page: summary
Next pages contain the actual dissertation
After that: annexes dunno if i translatet that right, ussualy stuff you got your data from, raw data
After that: Curriculum Vitae
after that: a statement that, this is the product of your own work and that the results are correctly stated.
If you don do it this way you dont get a chance to defend your work and no degree for you. But everyone learns this form way before you write a doctors dissertation, its used when you write a seminar for high school graduation, or your university diploma.
Then when you quote something you put it in actual quotes and also write from where that quote is. Writing in (get book title) will just make the person reviewing your work throw it in the bin.
And in a doctorial thesis if you say somthing like: if you multiply the age of the earth and the present speed of the recesion of the moon the moon should be much further outward. You probably should show that by multiplying those numbers, and actually showing some numbers.
2.2 cm a year X 4 000 000 000 = 88 000 KM the current average distance to the moon is 384 000 KM so you see its um well damn i better delete that part
The university that issued him a doctorate degree based on this piece of crap should loose its title as an university.
Christianity, One woman's lie about an affair that got seriously out of hand
What are the Christians gonna do to me ..... Forgive me, good luck with that.