Assuming I'm correct, and if you're feeling generous, I propose adding 15 for the creativity displayed in the formatting style.
I'm ok with that, but I will be taking 15 more away for this one:
"Then think of all the atoms in the universe,
Which all have multiple electrons,"
Isn't it general knowledge that the most abundant element in the universe is hydrogen, and that hydrogen only has one electron?
(for gamers in the know, this is a definite 50 DKP minus)