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Why was the world created?

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07-24-2007 5:03 PM 		Reply to: Message 1 by Open MInd
07-23-2007 12:37 PM

Hi Open Mind,
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You have some long 'paragraphs' and repeated sentences here. This definitely can't fly without some cleaning up. If I look between the repeats, my guess is that it is a bit broad.
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Get back to me when you are finished.
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