Not going to get a POTM out of me, but your message does seem to be an improvement relative to many of your efforts. I will remind you and the others that the core topic theme is "Punctuated equilibrium", and that all messages should have some connection to that theme.
I know that you're in the position of being the one against the many, but might I dare suggest you strive to post fewer but better messages? "Fewer but better" would also be a good thing for the other members.
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