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nator
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Message 68 of 149 (233267)
08-14-2005 10:24 PM
Reply to: Message 11 by FliesOnly
08-12-2005 3:33 PM


Re: Scene II
quote:
Please tell us that you are going to keep going with this. Also, you do seem to have the "characters" pegged pretty well...great job!
Yeah, Jesus was pretty much a bleeding-heart liberal do-gooder, so yeah, I'd probably do him.
Nice body, too. You ever see how ripped he is on the crucifixes?
Awesome abs.

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nator
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Message 70 of 149 (233270)
08-14-2005 10:29 PM
Reply to: Message 29 by Silent H
08-13-2005 11:22 AM


Re: Re the character of "Holmes"
quote:
I didn't mean to sound like I was wholly rejecting what you were doing, and I don't mind being satirized. I fear my comments have come off as damning rather than simply constructive criticism.
Honestly, holmes, I thought that your first reply to rohanrobin was written "in character."
Damn.

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nator
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Message 87 of 149 (234288)
08-17-2005 10:23 PM
Reply to: Message 84 by Nighttrain
08-16-2005 10:24 PM


Re: Act I, scene iv
quote:
Schraf has a mole on the inside of her right calf? Lucky Zhimbo.
Actually, no, no mole there.
I do have one about two inches to the right of my belly button, though.

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nator
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Message 88 of 149 (234290)
08-17-2005 10:24 PM
Reply to: Message 83 by robinrohan
08-16-2005 4:48 PM


Re: Act I, scene iv
I really don't appreciate this sexual harassment.

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nator
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Message 90 of 149 (234292)
08-17-2005 10:27 PM
Reply to: Message 86 by Faith
08-17-2005 10:14 PM


Re: Act I, scene iv
Yeah, he was pretty mean.
But I figure that we only tease the ones we love.
Oh, and robin, I don't wear sundresses.
They make my teeth look fat.

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nator
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Message 100 of 149 (234425)
08-18-2005 9:35 AM
Reply to: Message 89 by NosyNed
08-17-2005 10:26 PM


Re: sexual harassment
not here in front of everybody, ned.
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nator
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Message 107 of 149 (234742)
08-19-2005 7:55 AM
Reply to: Message 102 by Nighttrain
08-18-2005 8:05 PM


Re: Reply to critics
quote:
When you do caricatures or parody, the butts of your humour should be larger than life, yet containing a kernel of truth.
Are you saying that I have a big butt?
quote:
So they will say 'That`s not really me, is it'? If they are shallow folk, they feel insulted. If they have moved on, they appreciate the moment of fame and have a think about how they appear to others.
Yeah, well, I have got to say that so far, my portrayal has seemed to be the most, um, unflattering.
But maybe I'm just being shallow.
Everybody else has been portrayed as crotchety or just funny, but also usually somewhat smart. My character just seems like an idiot.
For instance, it would have been "insering a kernel of truth" (and also funny) to have had Charles Knight and the rest of the boys at the table, after asking me who said I had to look like a Playmate, start going gaga over some Playmate-esque woman across the room and not paying the least bit of attention to what I was saying.

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nator
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Posts: 12961
From: Ann Arbor
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Message 119 of 149 (235001)
08-20-2005 12:49 PM
Reply to: Message 108 by jar
08-19-2005 11:22 AM


Re: Reply to critics
quote:
Way down deep you are shallow.

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nator
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Message 120 of 149 (235002)
08-20-2005 12:50 PM
Reply to: Message 115 by robinrohan
08-19-2005 11:30 PM


Re: Reply to critics
Most of my peers have reviewed my clothed ass and think it's alright.
You'll have to ask Zhimbo about the unclothed ass evaluation.
But he's biased.
This message has been edited by schrafinator, 08-20-2005 12:52 PM

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nator
Member (Idle past 2199 days)
Posts: 12961
From: Ann Arbor
Joined: 12-09-2001


Message 122 of 149 (235055)
08-20-2005 6:40 PM
Reply to: Message 121 by Parasomnium
08-20-2005 6:02 PM


Re: Biassed?
Nope.
Five.

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